Compare the following:

“I am a compassionate person with a lot of resolve who wants to help people through medicine.”

“My four years of clinical work in a low-income clinic, taking vital signs and translating for Spanish-speaking patients, has strengthen my resolve to become a physician.”

See the difference?

A quick reminder: In your personal statement it’s critical to demonstrate your points with examples, rather than just state your thoughts. Show. Don’t just tell because anyone can say s/he is good with patients, kind-hearted and hard-working. Only a few excellent candidates can prove that.

For help with your personal statement for medical school, residency, fellowship or post bacc programs contact me.