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Is Your Residency Personal Statement a Little Too Personal?

I have a guest blogger today – my first ever. Dr. David Presser graduated from UCSF Medical School, completed his Emergency Medicine residency at UCLA/Olive View and his MPH at Harvard. He wrote an excellent primer on getting into an Emergency Medicine residency. Here’s today’s blog written by him:

Picture, if you will, a residency admissions committee member beneath a halo of light reading applicant essays in her office at midnight. Caffeine on her breath, crumpled white coat next to her desk chair, she is making steady progress on the never-ending stack of applicant files until she picks up a residency personal statement that begins, “I first became interested in Internal Medicine when Grandma was diagnosed with cancer…” Pulling out her hair by the fistful, she tosses the file into the trash. That cancer may not have killed your grandma, but it just might have killed your application. Read more ›

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Double Vision

I’ve had a couple of clients this season tell me that they had other professional editors revise their personal statements but that they want me to do a re-edit because they need my expertise. Instead of double paying for a second look, please come to me directly. I do outstanding work and expedite your edits. Here is my testimonials page. The number and caliber of remarks about my work says it all!

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Plagiarism

In a recent study published in the Annals of Internal Medicine, investigators report finding “evidence of plagiarism” in personal statements in 5.2% of residency applicants to Brigham and Women’s anesthesiology, general surgery, internal medicine, OB-GYN and emergency medicine residency programs between Sept. 2005 and March 2007.

Applicants should be aware of this type of scrutiny. (I hope that candidates won’t consider plagiarizing material for obvious ethical reasons!)

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Good Writing Means Never Having to Say, “I Want to be a Doctor”

It’s important to express to medical school admissions officers why you want to be a physician, but the key – as always – is to show, rather than tell. The content of your accomplishments and the skills and insight you have gained from them are compelling. Stating that you really, really want to be a doctor is not. (This is true for post bacc, residency and fellowship applicants too.)

Contact me for help with your medical school personal statement and secondary essays. Unlike other consultants, I do all of my own work – while maintaining quick turn around times. Here are copious testimonials about my work.

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AMCAS 2011 Open

You can now submit your 2011 AMCAS. Here is the web site.

Please contact me for medical school personal statement and AMCAS editing. For rolling admissions schools, the sooner you apply the better.

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About Dr. Michelle Finkel

Dr. Michelle Finkel

Dr. Finkel is a graduate of Stanford University and Harvard Medical School. On completing her residency at Harvard, she was asked to
stay on as faculty at Harvard Medical School and spent five years teaching at the world-renowned Massachusetts General Hospital.
She was appointed to the Assistant Residency Director position for the Harvard Affiliated
Emergency Medicine Residency where she reviewed countless applications, personal statements and resumes. Read more

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